I have my second commercial role-playing game entirely laid out at this point, in the form of a text-only beta. You can download a copy here:
If you have trouble reading it on the screen, that's because it's optimized for printing. This is also the reason for some of the black space -- it's set up to be printed double-sided.
I'm interested in comments. If you were interested in playtesting, this is probably your last chance to try the system out and influence its published form. Regardless, I'm interested in comments from gamers and non-gamers alike on the text's readability, accessibility, and layout. Any comment is welcome, tho I'm particularly interested in comments on the layout, and the usefulness of the index.
As a bonus, a character sheet/reference sheet can be found here: